4 Responses:

1. zonereyrie says:

   20 years ago at 4:10 pm

   Nice work, except...
   She looks at him wide-eyed. Underneath the table, she cocks the Glock she keep strapped underneath her crepe skirt.

   "And you always carry a Glock," he says. "That's not in your dossier, by the way. I recognize it by the sound of the hammer. Thigh or ankle?"

   Glocks are hammerless. As a Glock owner this leapt off the screen and strangled my suspension of disbelief.

2. primroseport says:

   20 years ago at 5:19 pm

   The origami part rules--so cheesy!

3. hastybreaching says:

   20 years ago at 11:10 pm

   Oh, man, did that story suck. Typical fan-fiction garbage.

4. hafnir says:

   20 years ago at 7:58 am

   Can't wait 'til Tom from Assemblage 23 makes another guest appearance! :)